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28 March 2010 @ 11:20 am
When Minho Steps In Pt. 3  
Title : When Minho Steps In
Author :vivalahyuk
Pairing : Donghae/Eunhyuk; slight Minho/Eunhyuk
Rating : PG

A/N: It's already part 3, everyone!!! *laughs happily* I'm sorry for being this late. I'm gonna try to make it faster in the next part. Now, let me rest a bit~ *crawls to the bed with strawberry yogurt in hand*

“Hyuk hasn’t home yet?” Leeteuk asked, taking off his jacket and scarf, heading to the living room where everybody was now worriedly waiting for Hyukjae. Leeteuk stroked his arm repeatedly, glaring at Donghae. He was still in major shock. He just had finished his Sukira schedule and slowly opened the dorm’s door when suddenly Donghae stormed out of the room and grabbed his arms tightly, mumbling something like, “Hyukkie..kidnapped..raped..conspiracy!!!”
Leeteuk tried to regain his focus, asking the other members who had gathered round in Hyukjae, Yesung, Sungmin, Ryeowook, and Kyuhyun’s dorm, “Nobody from Dream Team calls any of you?”
Everybody shook their head.
“Call the police, hyung! Call the police! This is a conspiracy, I told you!” Donghae yelled from across the room making everybody faced him in disbelief.
Leeteuk held on his head, “Can somebody calm him down? I’m going to call Danny-hyung.”
Kangin, being the crude good hyung he was, approached Donghae in steady pace. The room fell silenced in a bit.
Leeteuk was about to press the call button when suddenly, ‘Dalryeora..dalryeora..dalryeora..honey..,’ his phone rang.
“Oh, it’s Minho!” Leeteuk said.
Donghae’s eyes widen, “Let me talk to him!”
But Kangin pushed him back, “Ssshh!”
Leeteuk just sighed in frustration watching Donghae being in a state like that. He then picked up his phone and talked to Minho, “Ah, Minho-ah. Ah, yes..yes.. Of course, you can. We’ll be waiting. Thank you, Minho-ah.”
“WHAT DID MINHO SAY? WHERE IS HYUKKIE, HYUNG? WHERE IS HE?? I WANT MY HYUKKIE RIGHT NOW!!!” Donghae screamed from the top of his lungs to poor Leeteuk who looked really annoyed.
“Hyung,” Kyuhyun said to Donghae with a meaningless expression, “will you shut up? If Minho acknowledged the way you acted because he has snatched Hyukjae-hyung away from you and because he’s groping Hyukjae-hyung by now, I’m pretty sure, he would really enjoy the moment.”
Donghae narrowed his eyes at Kyuhyun, “Wait. What? Who says Minho’s groping Hyukkie’s body??”
Everybody in the room turned their gaze to Kyuhyun, sending him a deathly glare. Kangin smacked Kyuhyun’s head. Heechul slapped him hard. And Sungmin kicked him away.
“Ouch! I thought you love me, hyung!” Kyuhyun said to Sungmin, feeling a little irritated. Sungmin just moved back to his spot playing ignorant.
Kibum who had been quiet asked Leeteuk finally, “What did Minho say, hyung?”
Everyone was now staring at Leeteuk, waiting for the answer.
“Well, Minho said,” Leeteuk took a glance at Donghae who was standing on the couch, ready to jump if necessary. Leeteuk took a deep breath, “Minho said that Hyukjae had gotten drunk and he was going to take Hyukjae home.”
“How come?”
“He can’t drink!”
The questions started filling up the room. Everybody was flustered. And Donghae? He looked as if he were possessed by some passed-by spirit. He stared blankly at the door.
“Donghae-ah,” Leeteuk called him wearily.
“I’m gonna wait for Hyuk,” Donghae said bluntly, reaching the door.
Leeteuk let out another sigh. He was sure it was his 100th sighs of the day. Siwon patted Leeteuk’s back, “I’ll accompany him, hyung. You should rest.”

♥ ♥ ♥

Siwon ran to Donghae, trying to make his pace the same as Donghae. Siwon had been quite all day, but truthfully he really couldn’t stand watching Donghae like this. He decided to make a conversation, “Why are you acting like this?”
“Like what?”
“You know. Jerk.”
Donghae looked shock.
“What? I’m telling the truth. You’re being a total jerk today.”
“My boyfriend is in danger.”
“What kind of danger? Don’t make things up. Don’t be such a drama-queen, Donghae-ah.”
“I’m not!”
“Yes, you are.”
Siwon shook his head looking at Donghae, “Look, dude. You and Hyukjae have been dating for a long time. He the one who brings you laughter everyday. He the one who makes you feel okay if nobody’s around as long as he’s there beside you. He the one who makes you think square root from a hundred equals rainbow. He knows you really well. But I’m not sure you do.”
“I do know him well.”
“Yeah? I doubt it.”
“Are you picking up a fight?” Donghae stopped from walking.
“See? You always like this! If you’re trying to convince myself and yourself that you know Hyukjae that well, you have to trust him! Do you think Hyukjae is going to flirt with Minho?”
“No! But what if Minho is the one who’s flirting with Hyukjae?”
“Oh My Holy God! So what??? Don’t you get it? Hyukjae is head over heels over you. He’s in love with you. Why is he being attracted by a-just-turned-20-years-old-boy? Why?? Why???”
“Geez, calm down.”
“Just try to clear up your mind,” muttered Siwon continuing his walk.

It had been 15 minutes after their arguing. They waited in front of the building with silence. Donghae didn’t care at all about the conversation he had with Siwon before. “Square root from a hundred equals rainbow? Please,” Donghae snorted.
A black car suddenly approached them. A tall boy with another boy sleeping on his back came down from the car. It was Minho who piggybacked Hyukjae. Donghae clenched his fist and bit his lip, trying hard not to punch Minho right and there.
“Let me take care from here,” Donghae said snatching Hyukjae away from Minho.
Siwon endured himself not to scold Donghae.
“Thank you, Minho-ah,” said Siwon instead.

Donghae decided to take Hyukjae to his dorms. He didn’t mind if he had to walk one more story. Hyukjae’s dorm was too loud by all the members waiting his up. He wanted Hyukjae for himself. Donghae slowly opened the door and went to his room. He put Hyukjae down and sat beside him. Tracing Hyukjae’s features with his hand he said, “I do know you well, right Hyuk?”
But instead of getting proper answer, Donghae could hear Hyukjae was talking in his sleep, “Can’t..drink..anymore Minho-ah,” Hyukjae mumbled making Donghae face scrunched real bad.
“Aish! I gotta need some fresh air!”
Donghae stood up and walked out of the room leaving Hyukjae behind.

♥ ♥ ♥

Hyukjae opened his eyes slowly. Still feeling dizzy he tried to lift his own body from the bed. He took a glance at the bed sheet he had slept on. It was the color of dark blue and there was a white towel wrapped around the pillow. “This ain’t my bed.” He let his eyes roamed at every corner of the room. White bed, white pillow, white blanket, white furniture. “Definitely not my room.” Hyukjae smiled lightly to himself, “This is Teuk-hyung’s and Hae’s room.” Hyukjae stroked the bed gently while his eyes were wandering Donghae’s stuff. He could see Donghae’s photos with other members which he and Donghae had arranged a long time ago. He barely could find his own photo with Donghae. That’s just because Donghae kept Hyukjae’s pictures for himself personally in his secret drawer. Hyukjae smiled playfully, blushing. He then laid his eyes on Donghae’s old photo above his head. The photo was taken after their debut. Hyukjae could see Donghae’s long hair. He remembered the time when Super Junior’s dorms were visited by the four ahjummas. Lee Kyung Shil, one of the ahjummas, said, Donghae looked like a hero in anime about romance in that photo. “Yes, my hero.”
Hyukjae threw himself back on the bed. He sniffed in the smell. Hyukjae loved that smell. It was his number one favorite smell in the whole world, Donghae’s scent. Like his own personal branded of heroine, he had gotten addicted to it. “Hmm~ I just left you for a day and I already miss you this bad.”

He suddenly remembered about his promise to Donghae. He wondered where on earth Donghae was. He managed to get up from the bed. Feeling a little bit tipsy he reached for the door. He was about to open the door knob when unexpectedly his eyes landed on Donghae’s computer. “What the..?” There, on the computer, were pictures and videos of Hyukjae. No, correction, it was Hyukjae’s and Minho’s.
“No..no..no!! What the hell is he thinking?” Hyukjae said, clicking and clicking to watch what Donghae had found. Being his boyfriend for a long time Hyukjae had known what Donghae liked, an easily jealous boyfriend. That situation reminded him of Snow Dream Music Video. He was hugging and laughing happily with Changmin and Donghae was beyond furious. It took him three days to make Donghae could smile again.
Suddenly the door opened and Leeteuk’s head popped in, “Ah, you awake?”
“Hyung, where’s Donghae?” Hyukjae asked in apprehensiveness.
“After he had carried you here I met him in the hallway. He said he needed some fresh air. But I’m sure, he’s coming back soon.”
Hyukjae cursed to himself, “Stupid Hae!”
“Where are you going?” Leeteuk yelled to Hyukjae who had reached the doorway.
“Looking for Hae.”
“But, you’re still in a state of drunkenness! And Donghae will be home soon! I’m sure!”
Hyukjae didn’t care at all and rushed outside the dorm.

~to be continued~

1. If you are confused why on earth Donghae’s pillow is wrapped around by a towel and who the hell is the four ahjummas, well, you can always find it on YouTube xDDD I'm sorry, I've been trying to re-look for the eng sub link but I couldn't find it anymore. The show was on MBC and called Onlbam Visit Super Junior Dorm (if i'm not mistaken). Donghae said he wrapped his pillow with towel so that the pillow stayed clean from his hair spray. He tried to make the ahjumma's work who cleaned their dorm easier ^^.
2. And if you wanna know what had happened between Donghae, Hyukjae, and Changmin,
click here ^^
video credits to eunhaechickenfish@youtube.
Current Mood: cheerfulcheerful
kamerer220kamerer220 on March 28th, 2010 05:05 am (UTC)
"He is the one who makes you think square root from a hundred equals rainbow." One of the best lines ever and the fact that its coming from Siwon is even better.
vivalahyukvivalahyuk on March 28th, 2010 12:06 pm (UTC)
that was one of my favorite quote from Glee :D
yeah, at first i thought about kangin who was going to say it, but siwon suited that kind of image.
you know, gentleman xDDD
thx anyway~
letmeflyawaymcts051129 on March 28th, 2010 05:32 am (UTC)
letmeflyaway: haehyuk kissfishymcts051129 on March 28th, 2010 05:39 am (UTC)
Snow Dream Music Video i knew exactly what you are talking about bb LOL
hae was being ignored by hyuk tat time :c
wonder what will happen to hyuk when he finds hae...?
hae gets to rape the drunken boyfriend
anyway yeah take some rest sweetie dun overload urself...while i'll just..ermmm...start thinking about the pwp
vivalahyuk: glarehyukvivalahyuk on March 28th, 2010 12:10 pm (UTC)
you and your pervert mind xDDDDD
so do i, baby. so do i!!
yeah, i think i'm going to sleep.
but i see you just posted some-some in your journal.
gotta read that first!!
the fact that it was NC-17 and haehyuk always makes me hyper xDDDD
ime-chanime_ime_ime on March 28th, 2010 05:51 am (UTC)
ime-chan: dongtongime_ime_ime on March 28th, 2010 06:10 am (UTC)
"Hyukjae loved that smell. It was his number one favorite smell in the whole world, Donghae’s scent." LOL number one fav of course not his own smell...uh...i mean scent
vivalahyuk: iloveurlaughvivalahyuk on March 28th, 2010 12:11 pm (UTC)
Hyukjae's smell scent is Donghae's favorite perfume!!! xDDDD
ime-chan: dongtongime_ime_ime on March 28th, 2010 02:42 pm (UTC)
yeah definitely XD
*pointing at your p.s* what r u talkng about? i have the hard sub vid of that, why can't you find it?
oh yeah and that snow dream vid, i watch the fanvid instead, and it keep repeating and focusing on hae face, uh...poor hae XD
(no subject) - vivalahyuk on March 28th, 2010 02:59 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - ime_ime_ime on March 28th, 2010 03:18 pm (UTC) (Expand)
hyukie09hyukie09 on March 28th, 2010 06:57 am (UTC)
gosh how can donghae be so misguided sometimes..lol..omg how can u leave me like this....hopefully u write soon..
vivalahyuk: lookatmehaevivalahyuk on March 28th, 2010 12:12 pm (UTC)
because he is donghae!!!
i'll try to make it faster.
thx for your comment, sweetie~
hyukie09hyukie09 on March 28th, 2010 08:27 pm (UTC)
u welcome okay ill be patient
dbsj0001dbsj0001 on March 28th, 2010 06:59 am (UTC)
i saw many sweet moments here!
but i can't help but awww~ at donghae possesive and jealous nature but at the same time sweet gesture!

i love this part soooo much~
but i can't help but have a bad feeling about the next one! :(

hmmm...oh well can't wait to see it!
vivalahyuk: needmorehaevivalahyuk on March 28th, 2010 12:15 pm (UTC)
yesyes, i got inspired by many events happened these days!!
LOL. you always have bad feelings, don't you?
well, let see what am i gonna write for the next part.
crystalmicky on March 28th, 2010 08:21 am (UTC)
I loved the "He the one who makes you think square root from a hundred equals rainbow." part ♥ so sweet~

and I remember that video with Changmin, poor Hae looked so jealous XD I can't wait for the next part! :) @_@
vivalahyuk: glarehyukvivalahyuk on March 28th, 2010 12:18 pm (UTC)
that was my favorite quote from Glee!!
i love it too. that's why i put it in this part.
yesyesyes, when i saw that video i was like JDHJQWDNJWDHUWJE!!!
didn't hae look too obvious?? xDDDD
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vivalahyukvivalahyuk on March 28th, 2010 12:19 pm (UTC)
to tell you the truth, he kinda annoys me too.
why did i make him that way?
*bangs my head on the wall*
ShiShi™idioticvampyr on March 28th, 2010 09:02 am (UTC)
"square root from a hundred equals rainbow"
i think.. i heard this from glee? O__o

XDDDDD nice chapter!!!!!!!!!!

vivalahyuk: iloveurlaughvivalahyuk on March 28th, 2010 12:22 pm (UTC)
that was my favorite quote ever!!
i kinda waiting for the person who realizes it first and finally.. it's you!! *high five*
thanks for your comment anyway :DDDD
ShiShi™idioticvampyr on March 29th, 2010 04:50 am (UTC)
ohhhh~ i <<<<<3333 glee.. specially kurt.. ahaha..

pwease update soon!!! XDDD this is.. killing me.. ahahahahahaha..
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vivalahyuk: glarehyukvivalahyuk on March 28th, 2010 12:24 pm (UTC)
i love making kyuhyun that way.
no wonder the other members call him evil magnae.
he's that kind of person xDDD
*got hit by kyu*
xapplekiss on March 28th, 2010 11:35 am (UTC)
OMFG. I AM EXCITED. <3 Liked what Si Won said, though. <3
vivalahyuk: hessmokinvivalahyuk on March 28th, 2010 12:25 pm (UTC)
i'm as excited as you!!!
*jumping up and down*
LOL. siwon is a perfect gentleman, isn't he?
xapplekiss on March 29th, 2010 04:54 am (UTC)
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vivalahyuk: glarehyukvivalahyuk on March 28th, 2010 04:58 pm (UTC)
thank you!!
LOL. yes, that video showed us how much Hae got jealous of Changmin!! we all love it, don't we?? xDDD
azaChiaki: Donghae2azachiaki on March 28th, 2010 05:28 pm (UTC)
hae is jealous!!!
come on hae... hyukkie really love you
i wonder where did hae go...
vivalahyuk: lookatmehaevivalahyuk on March 29th, 2010 11:41 am (UTC)
where did hae go?
i'll give u a hint.
the most favorite landmark in seoul which is often used by fanfic author!!
get the clue?
ThatsForMe2Know: Cxthatsforme2know on March 28th, 2010 06:50 pm (UTC)
omg i love you for doing this, this is so awesome
the end of this pt got me all awwhhh... i hope nothing
happen to both of them... cuz like
hae was mad and went outside and then hyukkie went outside too
because he wanted to look for hae, but he wasn't feeling well
omg... you know what i mean right O;
anyway can't wait for next pt. ~*wink wink*~ 8D

vivalahyuk: hessmokinvivalahyuk on March 29th, 2010 11:44 am (UTC)
thank you, sweetheart ^^
oh! you can read my mind!
oops! did i just say that?
*covers her mouth with both hands*
ThatsForMe2Knowthatsforme2know on March 29th, 2010 05:38 pm (UTC)
yw ;D
and and.. yes i can bwahaha
i wonder why ~*wink wink*~♥ 8D
but but.. pshh NOOOOOOOO
that means that there's gonna be
some angsty over there O;
ugh.. ok i'll wait for next pt ~*is waiting*~ .-.
libido_moriendi on March 28th, 2010 06:58 pm (UTC)

Hello !
I just wanted to say that your story is awesome ! ♥ I'm french, so I can't manage english very well but your fic is so good that I made efforts to read it ! I really want to know more about this story ! I can't wait for next chapter ! ♥
Thanks a lot ^^
vivalahyuk: iloveurlaughvivalahyuk on March 29th, 2010 11:50 am (UTC)
thank you, honey. you flattered me >///<
i'll post the next part asap.
merci! ^^
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vivalahyuk: iloveurlaughvivalahyuk on March 29th, 2010 11:54 am (UTC)
LOL. yesyes, i thought so too. hae was soo over the top.
its kinda annoys me xDDD
i always love kyu being the evil one.
well, he is~
okey dokey, i'll update soon.
thanks for the comment.
suju_wonderbang: HaeHyuksuju_wonderbang on March 28th, 2010 11:35 pm (UTC)
Oooh, new chappie!
Haha, Hae is so jealous/spazzmatic. XD
And I loved Hae's and Wonnie's talk!
Lol "He is the one who makes you think sqaure root from a hundred equals rainbow." ONE OF THE MOST EPIC LINES EVER!!!!!!!!! ESPECIALLY SINCE IT IS COMING FROM SIWON!!!! XD XD XD
Ah, so that's why there was a towel!
Hmm, wonder what'll happen between Hae and Hyuk~
Can't wait for more!
vivalahyuk: needmorehaevivalahyuk on March 29th, 2010 11:59 am (UTC)
siwon was the perfect guy to talk to hae.
since he's really closed with hyuk and hae.
i love that line too! i got inspired by Glee thou xP
thank you for your comment, sweetie~
hyukhae4ever: *pout*hyukhae4ever on March 29th, 2010 03:55 am (UTC)
buahahahaha... Kyu, you do realize that you only made Hae more stressed by saying such a thing...?
you evil magnae, you.. lols *grins*

awwww... Hae, no need to be jealous, Hyukkie loves only you, no one else... ^^

btw, Minho should just stay away from Hyukkie and Donghae!
i don't like seeing him near them *pout*
hell, everyone should just leave EunHae alone!
that goes for you too Mr. Gentleman!!
vivalahyuk: lookatmehaevivalahyuk on March 29th, 2010 12:19 pm (UTC)
kyu is total evil, isn't he?
*got shot by kyu*
hell, everyone should just leave EunHae alone!
that goes for you too Mr. Gentleman!!
i think it goes for me too.
*takes one step back*

p.s. unnie, i thought you're gonna leave SPOT like u always do xDDD
hyukhae4ever: :)hyukhae4ever on March 29th, 2010 01:37 pm (UTC)
lols... well, i was left way too far behind...
the others will just reply to this message, and leave their comment here... ^^
ai_sumairuai_sumairu on March 30th, 2010 07:19 am (UTC)
Geez, Hae... Have more faith in your wife. He loves you that it's impossible for him to even flirt with someone else.

Hae! Trust is the most important thing in a relationship!!!
vivalahyukvivalahyuk on March 30th, 2010 01:47 pm (UTC)
maybe we should kidnap hyukkie first so Donghae would realize that? xDDD

thx for your comment anyway, sweetheart ^^
ai_sumairuai_sumairu on March 31st, 2010 03:09 am (UTC)
Kidnapping Hyukkie, I like! ^^b

Your welcome! :D
kajujux3 on April 2nd, 2010 02:51 am (UTC)
Friggin ACE yo~!!!
And where'd DongHae go?
Not tofind MinHo, right?

~~ Lol. Jealous!Hae is <3.

vivalahyuk: iwantmyhaevivalahyuk on April 2nd, 2010 05:35 am (UTC)
donghae? he could be anywhere.
kidding xDDD
i will post it tonight :DD
*finger crossed*
silencewhite: eunhae-whispersilencewhite on April 5th, 2010 02:10 pm (UTC)
I love how you connect everything from the show >< now I really think that this happened.. does Minho really said that hyukkie looks really cute when he was jumping? wahhh because I haven't watch dream team at all :(

huaaa thank you so much for the fan fictions and I'm sorry again for late reading :(

poor hae, he know worried that he doesn't know anything about hyukkie.. and hyukkie's mind is so full of had xD
vivalahyuk: hessmokinvivalahyuk on April 5th, 2010 03:28 pm (UTC)
yes, minho did say that to hyuk.
but i forget at which episodes -___-
i'll try to find it ^^
it's okay, stop apologizing xDDD
silencewhite: nyuusilencewhite on April 6th, 2010 05:52 pm (UTC)
ahhhhh i c...
thank you very much ><
okay i'll stop *bow* *hugs*