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27 July 2010 @ 01:04 am
24-Hours Convenience Store and Cups of Ramen  
Title: 24-Hours Convenience Store and Cups of Ramen
Author: vivalahyuk
Pairing: Donghae/Eunhyuk
Rating: R

A/N: i’m back!! after.. how long has it been? a year? lmao. idek. anyway, i made this comeback fic for my dear mcts051129 who had her birthday on July 6th. i know this gift is so freaking late. it's just.. there are too many distractions in my life. sorry *bows*. well, enjoy~

p.s. the banner was fail!! photoshop hates me xD

April, 2003

“YA! YA! YA! What are you guys doing? Let me go!!”
“Come on, Hyuk! Stop acting like you know nothing.”
“What are you talking about, Su? I’m not acting! YA! Who’s touching my butt?”
“Donghae-ah, keep your hands off.”
“What? It wasn’t me, hyung!”
“Dammit, you guys! Just tell me what happened!!!”
It was 11:30 PM and those boys were not giving up. They pinned Hyukjae against the wall and started yelling and blabbering nonsense words. Those boys were Donghae, Junsu, and Yunho to be exact. They had just finished their exercise at SM building and as soon as they saw Hyukjae, they ran after him and caught Hyukjae’s body like a prey. That day was Hyukjae’s birthday and each of them was feeling betrayed.
After all the yelling, Junsu calmed himself down and started talking, “Listen, Hyuk. Don’t you remember what day is today?”
Hyukjae, fully understood what was going on, put on his poker face, “It’s Friday. Something’s wrong?”
“Tsk. Hyukkie..Hyukkie..Hyukkie.., don’t you get it? There are three of us and you, you are being alone by yourself. It’s late and nobody is around. Come on Hyuk, give us a better answer,” Junsu said, exchanging smile with Donghae.
Hyukjae gritted his teeth. I’m doomed. “Fine. Today is my birthday. I think you guys owe me a birthday congratulatory?” Hyukjae whimpered with his puppy eyes.
Donghae smirked. He gazed intensely into Hyukjae’s eyes. Whispering, he approached Hyukjae’s earlobe seductively, “I think you owe us a treat, Hyukkie?”
Suddenly, the wind began to blow, sending shivers down to Hyukjae’s spine. Hyukjae closed his eyes as if he enjoyed every word that came from Donghae’s lips. He actually couldn’t tell which one made him feeling all giggly, Donghae’s whisper or the cold night wind. It’s like a butterfly was now flying around happily inside his stomach.
“YA, Hyuk!!!” Junsu shouted
Hyukjae opened his eyes slowly, waking up from his trance, “Wha..?”
“You owe us a treat! Weren’t you listening?”
Yunho blocked his ears with both of his hands, “Stop shouting, Junsu-ah! He’s not deaf.”
“Why do you hate me, hyung????”
Yunho rolled his eyes, “Oh, God.”
Donghae took his attention back to Hyukjae, “So Hyuk, we want our treat. Now.”
Hyukjae sighed heavily.
“Come on Hyuk, don’t be such a cheapskate,” Yunho said patting his back.
“Yeah, you already treated Sungmin-hyung. Now we want ours,” Junsu muttered with a pout on his face.
Hyukjae’s face turned darker, “That’s because Sungmin-hyung treated me when he’s having his birthday last year. You, you, and you,” Hyukjae exclaimed pointing at their faces one by one, “didn’t even bother to ask me out when you guys had your birthday!”
“But we’re trainees, we don’t have money that much,” Yunho answered patiently.
Hyukjae put on his what-the-fuck expression, “Neither do I, hyung!! Fine. You guys want my treat?”
Junsu and Donghae nodded showing their enthusiasm.
“Alright. Let’s go then.”

♥ ♥ ♥

“What the fuck is this place?” Junsu looked at Hyukjae confusedly.
“Convenience store.”
“What on earth are we going to do here?”
“Eating. I’m going to treat you guys, remember?”
“What the hell are we going to eat here, Hyuk? Huh? What?”
“Listen, I know the employee who works there. He’s my sister’s friend. Park Jonghwa-hyung. He’s a real nice guy. While we’re eating ramen there, we can talk freely and laughing loudly without bothering anybody like if we eat in a fancy restaurant. See the good point? Great. Now, follow me!” Hyukjae ordered the other boys, hiding his cheeky smile.
He opened the convenience store’s door and soon greeted by the employee from the inside, “Ah, Hyukjae-ah!”
“Jonghwa-hyung~” Hyukjae ran a little, hugging him wholeheartedly.
Jonghwa released the hug, “What are you doing here?”
Hyukjae told Jonghwa that he’s going to spend his birthday night with his friends there. He then turned around to face his dumbfounded buddies and innocently introduce them to Jonghwa one by one. What Donghae, Junsu, and Yunho could do was just sending their deathly glare to Hyukjae without Jonghwa knew. The boy replied by giving them his famous gummy smile and silently mumbled, “You’re welcome.”

The four boys were now sitting around the table near the cashier waiting for their ramen to be fully cooked. Junsu was staring blankly at his ramen with his mouth open and Yunho was watching him amusedly.
“You’re so despicable, Hyuk. Look what have you done to Junsu,” Yunho chuckled breaking the silence. He obviously couldn’t hide his laugh watching Junsu who looked like a kid who got his robot toy stolen.
Hyukjae looked at Junsu and started giggling madly, “Junsu-ah, close your mouth. You look ridiculous.”
“Speaking of ridiculous,” Donghae said opening his ramen cup, “have you noticed that our vocal teacher always doing ridiculous expression every time he sings?”
“I know right?? He’s so weird,” Hyukjae responded, following Donghae’s action by opening his ramen cup.
“Speaking of weird,” said Junsu while blowing his ramen, “do you know the new trainee girl? She’s so freaking weird. She’s always carrying her broken Barbie doll everywhere. One day, I even saw her pinning needles all over the doll’s body. She’s creeping me out.”
“All girls are weird,” Donghae said slurping his ramen. “In the future, if I couldn’t find any girls that match well with me I’m going to marry Hyukkie.”
Hyukjae suddenly choked on his ramen. He quickly grabbed the bottle of mineral water and gulped it, covering his blushing face from the others.
“No!” Junsu spurted. “I’m going to be the one who marry Hyukkie if I couldn’t get any girls whose perfect for me.”
Hyukjae choked for the second time, patting his own chest lightly.
“Aish, you’re not going to get any girls if you’re eating that way,” Yunho blurted out, cleaning his face from Junsu’s spit.
“Why do you hate me, hyung????”

♥ ♥ ♥

April, 2005

It’s been two years since the inception of their eating-ramen-ritual in the same convenience store near SM building every time they had some moments to celebrate. And it’s been a year since DBSK debuted in South Korea. That day they had another moment to be celebrated, DBSK was being planned to have their Japan’s debut this April. The fact that Junsu and Yunho were going to leave Korea in two days making Hyukjae’s frantic as hell. He was happy for Junsu and Yunho. Sincerely. But deep down inside his heart, he was getting scared to be left alone without Junsu. He knew he still had Donghae and other trainee members that took care of him a lot. But Junsu was the one who’s there beside him from the beginning. They were inseparable. Junsu would always be the one on the left and Hyukjae would always be the one on the right if they walked together. That’s the golden rule. If Junsu gone, who’s gonna be on his left side? Unconsciously, tears were falling down from Hyukjae’s eyes. He failed holding himself from crying. Damn.
“Ya! Don’t cry, Hyuk,” uttered Junsu tried to look away from Hyukjae’s face.
“I’m not crying, stupid.”
Yunho shook his head in disbelief, “Would you guys stop acting cool in front of us? Just hug each other already! We’re not telling anybody, right Hae?”
Donghae smiled tenderly, “Yes. Our lips are sealed.”
Hyukjae and Junsu stole a glance at each other faces. They finally burst into tears as they hugging each other tightly.
“Ya, babo! Don’t forget.. to call me.. when you’re free, okay?” Hyukjae mumbled in between his sobs.
“Why don’t you the one who call me?”
“The cost is expensive.”

♥ ♥ ♥

November, 2005

“Cheers for us!”
“Yes, cheers for us, Super Junior 05.”
Hyukjae smiled tossing his ramen cup toward Donghae’s. After a really long wait, they finally got their own debut under the name of Super Junior 05.
Hyukjae and Donghae had just finished their first performance on SBS’s music program, Popular Songs, and decided to take a cup of ramen before going back to dorm. Both of them were all too happy they barely could even speak to start a conversation. Hyukjae was still grinning widely while he’s eating his ramen. That night was just too much for him.
“Stop grinning, Hyuk. You’re going to hurt your cheeks,” Donghae chuckled looking at Hyukjae.
“I can’t even feel my own cheeks, Hae-ah,” Hyukjae responded, still grinning madly.
Donghae laughed out loud, he didn’t even realize that he was pinching Hyukjae’s cheeks as he said, “You’re too cute.”
It was like a tacky teenager movie with imaginary flowers and fireworks in the background. Oddly, Hyukjae couldn’t hear any sounds that coming through his ears. All that he could hear were just the fireworks popping out simultaneously and the sound of his heartbeat beating faster uncontrollably. Time please stop. Hyukjae talked to himself holding his chest that about to explode.
“♫ ♫ ♫ ♫ ♫ ♪”
“Oh, that’s my cellphone,” Donghae spoke ruining the moment and definitely quenching Hyukjae’s fireworks.
Hyukjae made a sudden movement by slurping his ramen. He didn’t want Donghae to notice the color-changing on his cheeks which now was becoming a bright pink flush.
“Um..yes?” Hyukjae squeaked almost choked on his ramen.
“Junsu wants to talk to you. He said you didn’t bring your cell phone.”
“Err, yes. I left it on our dorm,” said Hyukjae taking Donghae’s cellphone nervously.
“Yes, Su. Speak.”
Donghae turned his face around from Hyukjae’s, trying hard to catch the oxygen as much as he could. Calm down, Hae. Calm down. Breathe in. Breathe out. Breathe in. Breathe out. Dammit. Did I just pinch Hyukjae’s cheeks and told him that he’s cute? What should I do next? Kiss him? No no no no, that’s too fast. He’s gonna freak out. Should I tell him that I like him first and then kiss him? Should I? Should I?
”Um..Hae? Hae? Donghae-ah!” Half yelling Hyukjae slapped Donghae’s shoulder.
“Y..yes, Hyuk. What did Junsu say?” Donghae stammered stirring his ramen; which didn’t even need to be stirred.
“He said he was really happy for us and he said sorry he couldn’t be able to celebrate Super Junior’s debut with us here. DBSK’s schedule in Japan is too packed. Oh, and everybody said hi.”
There was a long paused, before Hyukjae spoke again, “I miss them, Hae. I miss them. I miss.. Junsu.”
“Hey hey, I’m here, Hyukkie.”
Hyukjae smiled, “We’re always gonna be together right, Donghae-ah?”
Donghae messed Hyukjae’s hair gently, “Of course, we’re in the same group.”
And now that you and I are in the same group, I promise I will be the one who protect you, Hyukkie. My precious jewel Hyukkie..

♥ ♥ ♥

October, 2006

“Hyukjae, will you be the one?”
“Aish! What the hell?” Donghae looked at the door and now he could see clearly who were the intruder that had ruined his secret-proposal-practice.
Junsu and Yunho groaned in pain as they were rubbing their butt, but as soon as they saw Donghae’s shock expression they were grinning mischievously.
“Well..well..well, what do we have here?” said Yunho as he stood up and helped Junsu to get up from the floor.
Donghae rubbed his temple, feeling annoyed, “What on earth are you guys doing here?”
Junsu showed off his stupid smile, “It’s your birthday. We want our treat.”
Shit. I forgot about them. They’re gonna ruin everything.
“What did you just say?” asked Junsu.
“What? Nothing.”
“Fine. No treat from you. Big deal. Just let us know one thing,” Junsu showed off his stupid smile again. He and Yunho were now in front of Donghae ready to attack the poor guy with questions, “what are you up to?”
Donghae bit his bottom lip, taking couple steps back.
“Why does Hyukjae involved and we’re not?” Yunho took a step closer.
Donghae froze in his spot. He looked at them with his eyes wide open and his jaw dropped down.
“Were you guys,” Donghae gulped, “eavesdropping?”
“So, are you gonna propose to him tonight? Where? Where? How? Let us help!” Junsu chattered, literally bouncing up and down on the bed.
“No. I’m doing it myself,” Donghae ignored, walking out of the room.
They stared at Donghae in astonishment. And Junsu, he couldn’t help to give Donghae the last word of good luck or.. he thought so, “You’re such a total snob, Lee Donghae!”

♥ ♥ ♥

“Why aren’t they coming?”
“Junsu and Yunho-hyung.”
“Err, schedules I think.”
Hyukjae’s nodded, his lips made an ‘O’ shape.
Donghae looked down and keep scratching his nape.
“But, where is Jonghwa-hyung?” Hyukjae asked again, wandering his eyes around the store.
“Um.., Jonghwa-hyung? He said he..”
“Come to think of it, why is this store so quiet?”
“That’s because..”
“This is so weird. Why Jonghwa-hyung leave this store unguarded?”
“Err, it’s just because..”
“What if some robber breaks in and steals food or stuff.. or worse.. what if they steal the money from the cashier-machine?”
“Listen, Hyuk,” said Donghae putting his fore-finger on Hyukjae’s lips, “I need to tell you something.”
Hyukjae was so surprised by the sudden movement. His face slowly turned into bright red color.
“But please, please don’t cut me off before I finish talking, okay?”
Is he going to tell me something that I’ve been waiting for years? Is he? Is he? Gosh. I’ve been waiting for this moment…Ugh, or maybe he’s just gonna tell me that I look disgusting using this lip-gloss. Not my fault. I wanna look good in his birthday!
“Hyuk, are you listening?” Donghae wove his hand in front of Hyukjae’s face.
Hyukjae wriggled uncomfortably, “Yes, yes, I am.”
Donghae breathed heavily. He forced himself to look right into Hyukjae’s eyes and began speaking,
“There was this moment while you and I were dancing together, sharing our passion and love.. It was the first time I knew that.. you were the only person I wanted to dance all my dances with.”
Hyukjae was caught off guard. Suddenly he felt like he really needed a tank full of oxygen.
Donghae didn’t notice the sudden change of Hyukjae’s act, so he continued,
“I thought that it mattered what I said or where I said it. Then I realized the only thing that matters is that.. you. You make me happier than I ever thought I could be.. and if you let me, I will spend the rest of my life trying to make you feel the same way,” Donghae waited for a second to catch his breath,
“Hyukjae, will you be the one for me?”
Hyukjae stared deeply into Donghae’s eyes, which he found really beautiful that night, trying to read what was hidden there. Hyukjae smiled. He already knew the answer since a long time ago. He looked at Donghae who was now busying himself looking at his own shoes.
“Donghae-ah, look at me.”
Donghae lifted his head, convincing himself that he had done the right thing.
“I don’t believe in soulmates, and I don’t think you and I were destined to end up together.”
Donghae’s face turned pale as he kept biting his lips.
“What I do believe is that we fell in love and that we’re gonna work hard for our relationship. Lee Donghae..”
“Yes, Hyukkie?”
“I do. Yes, I do.”
And Donghae’s birthday night ended up with both of them shared their first kiss together.

♥ ♥ ♥

April, 2007

“You wear too much clothes, Hyukkie.”
“Ngghh, not my fault. Now would you shut up and just fuck me already?”
Donghae smirked teasingly, “You’re so demanding, aren’t you?”
Hyukjae and Donghae were actually just planning to eat some ramen at the same convenience store to celebrate Hyukjae’s birthday. But with young blood running inside their veins, err, or it’s just maybe because of Donghae was such a horny young adult man and Hyukjae was becoming a slut that night, here they were, having sex inside the store’s toilet.
“Lee Donghae, stop teasing. You wanna play, huh?”
Both of them were still using their pants on and Hyukjae was pinned against the cold wall being carried by Donghae. They kissed passionately, as Hyukjae’s moan’s becoming the soundtrack of the wild night. Hyukjae rubbed his still covered cock seductively toward Donghae’s cock. Donghae couldn’t help but groaned in pleasure. Both men were moaning wantonly due to the friction.
“Fuck you, Lee Hyukjae.”
“Oh, I can’t wait.”
Donghae kissed Hyukjae wetly and started nibbling on his earlobe, down to his perfect jaw, and didn’t forget to put mark on Hyukjae’s neck. He held Hyukjae’s thighs up high while his hand was undoing Hyukjae’s pants.
“Shit! It won’t open!” Donghae cursed still busying himself licking and biting on Hyukjae’s nipple.
Hyukjae bit his red lips while his hands was clinging on Donghae’s neck tightly, “Don’t you know, Hae-ah? Mmmmmhh.. Standing position.., pants off first.”
“Tell me about it,” Donghae smirked in victory, finally succeeded undoing Hyukjae’s pants.
“Don’t you know, Hyukjae-ah? I’m an expert..”
One of Donghae’s hand started stroking Hyukjae’s member while the other one resting on Hyukjae’s thigh.
“What, Hyukkie?”
“Nggghhhh, put it in now!!” Hyukjae’s breath became heavier as he entwined their body closer.
“With my pleasure..”
“YA! YA! YA! You two, get out now!”
Donghae stopped his action looking at Hyukjae who looked really shocked.
“Shit. Just get lost, will ya?” Donghae shouted from inside the toilet.
“What should we do?” Hyukjae panicked.
“Continue what we have started. Now relax, okay? I’m going in.”
Hyukjae nodded closing his eyes in excitement.
“YA! Don’t give me that attitude, Lee Donghae! Get out or I’m telling manager-hyung!”
Hyukjae’s eyes widen. He pushed Donghae a little, “It’s Heechul-hyung! We should get out, Hae-ah.”
“But, I was just about to go in.”
A loud bang from the toilet door could be heard again, “YA! Get out! Now!”
“Hae, we should get out.”
“Fuck. Fine. Give us 4 minutes!” Donghae yelled, holding his anger.
Heechul exchanged smirked with Kyuhyun, the one who had accompanied him getting rid of this soon-to-be EunHae’s public sex scandal.
“2!” Heechul yelled back, high-fiving Kyuhyun.
Donghae cursed silently. Hyukjae calmed him down by kissing Donghae’s lips with apologetic smile covering his face.
Two minutes later, Donghae and Hyukjae had finally managed to put their clothes on properly. Together, they got out from the toilet. Hyukjae’s face was still blushing and his body was still hot. Donghae held Hyukjae’s hand tightly, reassured him to stay calm.
“Well..well..well, couple of the year, huh?” Heechul said with a mocking tone.
“What do you want, hyung?” asked Donghae feeling irritated.
“We’re gonna celebrate Hyukjae-hyung’s birthday in a restaurant together. With manager-hyungs,” Kyuhyun answered, eyes locked on his PSP.
“And DBSK members,” Yunho suddenly showed up.
Junsu walked closer to Hyukjae, dragging him from Donghae.
“Hyukkie-ah, was he rough on you?”
“Donghae. Was he rough on you? Did you guys use condom?”
Donghae who eavesdropped their conversation burst out and snatched Hyukjae away from Junsu, “YA!”
He intertwined both of their hands once again, “Are you okay?”
Hyukjae nodded shyly.
“You know? We can always continue it. Restaurant’s toilet?’
Kyuhyun snorted, eyes still locking on PSP, “Don’t even think about it, hyung. We’re watching.”

♥ ♥ ♥

Current Mood: cheerfulcheerful
Current Music: A Short Journey - Super Junior
vivalahyukvivalahyuk on July 26th, 2010 06:36 pm (UTC)
SPOT for mcts051129
letmeflyawaymcts051129 on July 27th, 2010 02:59 am (UTC)
not a shipper of them, but just admire their brotherly relationship
and i spy tint of Yunsu here ;A; I just love it when junsu asks “Why do you hate me, hyung????”, it makes me want squeeze his cheeks and kick his dolphin butt LOL
and dorky best friends are dorky.
the part when DBSK is going to japan, i can't manage to contain myself and smile like crazy during their conversation, especially when hyuk gives out such lame reason-as always lmfao
i really wonder how hae's ringtone sounds like
and the proposal was interesting, god knows donghae would propose in a convenient store, i mean, he doesn't look like that kind of person who would do such things, but i'm sure hyuk will 8D
i like the part when hyuk tried to cover up his lip gloss-oh jeeezzzzz he's such a girl, hmmm wonder what colour he used. oh and what flavour too, guess i'll just have to ask donghae after they kissed rofl
but what makes me go mad is those snarky two, goshhhhhhh they ruined the moment
/brain screams
srsly i need to read some good smut now...hmmmmmmm xD;
but hyuk was such a slut in the toilet, plus they even haven't yet started-i wonder how he would act during the real thing
LOL@your fic banner. it's okay bb, somehow you'll manage to create awesome ones one day...yeah one day xD all you need to do is to spend like one hour each day talking to photoshop, and after one month, you'll be able to be a successful photoshopper!
crappy method;A;
anyway, it's been a while i had stalked your page
plus the banner
and the little colourful squares in front the usernames
i just love simplicity <3
letmeflyawaymcts051129 on July 27th, 2010 03:00 am (UTC)
i didn't notice my comment was that long...D:
vivalahyuk: hearthyukvivalahyuk on July 28th, 2010 03:03 am (UTC)
oh i love long comment.
so it's okay xD
yesyes, i kinda miss hyuksu moment lately so i ended up put those two in my fic.
lmao. at first i wanted to make twins as hae's ringtone since it's their debut song but, nah.
because im not really into that song xD
hyukkie is a girl. and it's shiny pink with strawberry flavor. delicious and kissable enough for hae.
omg, yes, i almost wrote smut!!!
didn't believe it myself. lol. i kept blushing and covering my face while typing that part ><
photoshop does hate me. like srsly Dx
one time i tried to edit a picture. it's taking me all night long to figure it out. when i finally knew how and try to repeat the same method.. it didn't work. or maybe it's just because of my small memory inside my crappy brain xD
lol. me too. i love simplicity.
noroimononoroimono on July 26th, 2010 06:50 pm (UTC)
oooooo spot~!
noroimononoroimono on July 26th, 2010 08:36 pm (UTC)
haehyuk (almost) public sex was WIN, especially chullie and kyu interrupting them!!!!

awww........... such a sweet story~ then totally turned naughty at the end
*sigh* hyukjae u slut~

welcome back to the writing world ^-^
noroimononoroimono on July 26th, 2010 08:40 pm (UTC)
oooooo and forgot to say that banner for this fic totally cracked me up!
the ramen in the middle and junsu's expression!!!!
*how cute~?*
vivalahyuk: iwantyouhyukvivalahyuk on July 28th, 2010 03:08 am (UTC)
lol. they shouldn't interrupting the sex, right?
but the writer here was ttly suck because she almost die typing that almost smut part xD
yes, i'm glad i'm back ^^
kekeke, thank you.
just because i love ramen :9
thanks for commenting, dear~
Thiti / Tee: Hae- lolmochijang on July 26th, 2010 07:05 pm (UTC)
lol the title really got my attention xD "Ramen"!! x33

“Why don’t you the one who call me?”
“The cost is expensive.”
LOL!! That's just like my mom xD
Cheap lol (:

This made my day xD
so funny ^^
I feel like eating ramen now...
vivalahyuk: iwantmyhaevivalahyuk on July 28th, 2010 03:11 am (UTC)
oh my mom is also like that.
and hyukkie too xD
thank you, sweetie ^^
now go get your ramen >
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vivalahyukvivalahyuk on July 28th, 2010 03:13 am (UTC)
lol. thank you, sweetheart ^^
you.. missed me?
well, that's new..
oh come here, you *hugs*
dbsj0001dbsj0001 on July 26th, 2010 09:04 pm (UTC)
LOL! i love haehyuk crazy hormones~ ;P
too bad they weren't able to continue because of heechul and the evil!magnae~
i want to see them get married already~ :P
thanks for sharing!
vivalahyukvivalahyuk on July 28th, 2010 03:14 am (UTC)
they're hormones are never fail.
i bet if i lock those two in a room they're gonna do it for million times.
lol. wth. i should stop xD
thank for commenting ^^
smilecoffe: Eunhyuk•Happy Umbrellasmilecoffe on July 26th, 2010 09:19 pm (UTC)
“Ya, babo! Don’t forget.. to call me.. when you’re free, okay?” Hyukjae mumbled in between his sobs.
“Why don’t you the one who call me?”
“The cost is expensive.”

lost inspiration
I almost cry but burst out laugh right after that conversation
this fic is fluffy :">
vivalahyuk: randomvivalahyuk on July 28th, 2010 03:17 am (UTC)
you almost cry?
well, i kinda miss hyuksu moment lately so i ended up putting those two in my fic.
but good thing i can make you laugh xD
thanks for commenting ^^
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vivalahyuk: hearthyukvivalahyuk on July 28th, 2010 03:26 am (UTC)
toilet sex is indeed very hot *Q*
thanks for commenting ^^
mister fish, did you die?tees2mai on July 26th, 2010 11:22 pm (UTC)
i think even when hae turns 40, he'll be like a horny teenager 8DDDD

vivalahyuk: itdoesfeelgoodvivalahyuk on July 28th, 2010 03:27 am (UTC)
oh yes he is.
and hyukkie will still be a slut.
hae's slut xD
xapplekiss on July 27th, 2010 12:52 am (UTC)
Lol. Snarky Kyu. :P XDDD GO GO GO.

vivalahyuk: hearthyukvivalahyuk on July 28th, 2010 03:46 am (UTC)
yes, because kyu is just awesome like that. lol.
kinda reminds me of this title or description
xapplekiss on July 28th, 2010 12:05 pm (UTC)
ochidyatiochidyati on July 27th, 2010 03:17 am (UTC)

Donghae’s face turned pale as he kept biting his lips.
“What I do believe is that we fell in love and that we’re gonna work hard for our relationship. Lee Donghae..”

keren eonni ficnyaaaa kya :3
vivalahyuk: iwantyouhyukvivalahyuk on July 28th, 2010 03:29 am (UTC)
hehehe, thank you, dear ><
oh, eonnie?
am i older?
huweeeeee T.T
ochidyatiochidyati on July 28th, 2010 03:54 am (UTC)
oh! i dunno you older than me or not,, ahaha its my habbit to call someone 'onnie' if i dont know her name,,, so im sorry ><
jadi aku manggilnya apa nih hehehe :P
vivalahyuk: iwantmyhaevivalahyuk on July 28th, 2010 02:35 pm (UTC)
apa ya?
org2 lj pd manggil V.
ehehehe x3
(Anonymous) on July 27th, 2010 03:49 am (UTC)
welcome back!! woot woot.. oh um i love your story lol..junsu is so cute well him and hyuk there so cool together...i love haehyuk and yunho and junsu too evil chu, n kyu..lol..
oh yeah umm i dont know if u remember me or not bt um do u remember the forum of hyukjae?? the one u joined its not working right know because the system crashed but its going to open on july 30 dont remember the time..i thought i let u know..
hyukie09hyukie09 on July 27th, 2010 03:51 am (UTC)
oh the comment from the top is mine i thought i was logged in but i wasnt sorry about that..
vivalahyuk: iwantmyhaevivalahyuk on July 28th, 2010 03:35 am (UTC)
of course i remember you, sweetie.
why wouldn't i? xD
oh yes, that.
err, actually i still don't really get it how to use forum. i hv account in sj-world too but don't really know how to do this and that. i suck Dx
hyukie09hyukie09 on July 29th, 2010 02:13 am (UTC)
yeah lol i wasnt sure, oh and you just have to mess around with it like be in it for a while and just try to get used to it. oh and sjworld i have one too bt i really dont get it so im planning on getting out lol...
teukteuk_83teukteuk_83 on July 27th, 2010 03:53 am (UTC)
i love the
“In the future, if I couldn’t find any girls that match well with me I’m going to marry Hyukkie.”

cute fic
vivalahyukvivalahyuk on July 28th, 2010 03:37 am (UTC)
oh, he will.
hae will marry hyukkie.
thank you, sweetie ^^
(Anonymous) on July 27th, 2010 12:19 pm (UTC)
Hey! Eunhae supporters, follow me in
thanks :D
bananamilkhyuk: no other than hyukbananamilkhyuk on July 27th, 2010 03:13 pm (UTC)
Ya, babo! Don’t forget.. to call me.. when you’re free, okay?” Hyukjae mumbled in between his sobs.
“Why don’t you the one who call me?”
“The cost is expensive.”

Hahaha.. THIS IS WIN!!

Glad that you're finally coming back to the fic writing world, V!

vivalahyuk: babelookatmevivalahyuk on July 28th, 2010 03:42 am (UTC)
well, what could we do?
hyukkie is cheap. lol.
yesyes, i'm glad too xD
thanks for commenting, sweetheart ^^
baby_buggsbaby_buggs on July 27th, 2010 04:39 pm (UTC)
*cracks up*

oh my goodness that was hilariously adorable!! the bathroom. and Kyu and Heechul just have to plot together. XXDD
vivalahyuk: hearthyukvivalahyuk on July 28th, 2010 03:45 am (UTC)
lmao. glad i made you cracking up xDDD
well, kyu and heechul are just awesome like that >:D
thanks for commenting~ ^^
hyukcollectcars on July 27th, 2010 05:06 pm (UTC)
seems that everybody loves cheapskate and slutty hyukkie :D
me not different X3

nao, stop saying that i'm pervy...you almost write smut bebe =3 not innocent at all... kehehehe... public bathroom... *permisi, mau numpang menghayal dulu... *

yay! Junsu! LOL wth? poor yunho attacked by “Why do you hate me, hyung????” XDDD

and hyuksu XDD

and OMO!! Heechul and Kyu was the best LOL evils is always loved :D

okay, that was a fail comment
p.s: do i have to welcome you back? :D
vivalahyuk: iwantmyhaevivalahyuk on July 28th, 2010 03:50 am (UTC)
haha. hyukkie is a slut. hae's slut xD
i ALMOST write smut. means my pervy grade is still lower than you, unnie.
*ikutan ngayal*
i just miss junsu too much, unnie TT
kyu and heechul rule the world i they get along together xD

p.s. of course you should. unnie, why u used this account?
hyukcollectcars on July 28th, 2010 04:14 am (UTC)
WELCOME BACK MY BEBE~ so be active writing!!!

because i commented at the very bottom
it just because i want to :D

Tiffany Leeeunhaelover on July 27th, 2010 05:17 pm (UTC)
“Why do you hate me, hyung????”

bwahahaha junsu got pawned! 8D
this was awesome! i never liked..hyuk and junsu being a couple. but I admire their epic friendship ♥
. . . ramen for birthday treats, way to go hyuk! lol seriously why is the birthday boy treating and not the best friends?! the irony of life, pfft -_-
right, just when we thought there would be smut there goes Heenim and Kyu ruining everything! EPIC MUCH /SMIRKS.
vivalahyuk: iwantyouhyukvivalahyuk on July 28th, 2010 03:55 am (UTC)
i love hyuksu friendship too.
kinda miss hyuksu moment ><
i ask myself the same question everyday, well that's life. what an unfair unwritten rule xD
just because the writer here is too lame to write smut xD
thanks for your comment, sweetie ^^
crossing_bycrossing_by on July 29th, 2010 04:28 am (UTC)
hahahaha devil maknae on the loose ...
hihihih eunhae gotta hold them self up ;D
and it wont getting any better with heechul side with the devil :P
vivalahyukvivalahyuk on July 29th, 2010 05:02 pm (UTC)
yes, just because i love the evil!kyu.
he's just awesome like that xD
and eunhae, maybe they're really gonna do the restaurant's toilet? lol. who knows?
maiki_rashumaiki_rashu on January 9th, 2011 05:17 pm (UTC)
So loved it! I liked how they got together and the answer of Hyukjae after Donghae's confession was just perfect!
And rolf at the ending!! XD
vivalahyuk: hotboyishotvivalahyuk on January 10th, 2011 12:50 am (UTC)
awww, i'm glad you loved it.
well, kyu is just being kyu XD
thanks for reading and commenting, bby.