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16 March 2010 @ 01:55 am
When Minho Steps In Pt. 1  
Title : When Minho Steps In
Author : vivalahyuk
Pairing :
Donghae/Eunhyuk; slight Minho/Eunhyuk
Rating :
PG-13



It was 2 A.M in the morning and the moon was still shining oh so brightly. That night was all silent and all that could hear was just the sound of the wind. Another sound that clearly filled Donghae’s ear and the emptiness of the night was the other boy’s moan. Correction: Hyukjae’s fucking beautiful moan. For Donghae, Hyukjae’s moan equals music. Donghae and Hyukjae were doing their make out session on the couch in the middle of the living room, didn’t care if the other members would hear.
“Hae~” said Hyukjae while he was sitting on Donghae laps comfortably.
“Hmmm?” that was all Donghae could say as he busying himself sucking and biting Hyukjae’s neck.
“Hae~”
“What is it, honey?” Donghae managed to talk in between his kisses.
“Enough, Hae~” Hyukjae answered pushing Donghae a little.
Donghae was taken aback and stopped his action, “WHY??”
Hyukjae tried to get off from Donghae’s laps and walked slowly to his room, yawning. “I have schedule tomorrow and my body was wrecked. I need sleep. Good night, Hae.”
Donghae looked at him with big eyes as if he had said something ridiculous, “And I didn’t get my daily dosage?”
“Save it for tomorrow. I’m freaking tired. Nite, Hae.”
And the door was closed in front of Donghae’s face.
“Aish!”


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Hyukjae woke up early that morning. It was not something he usually did but that morning he just had to. He rushed to the bathroom, didn’t notice his boyfriend was still sleeping on the couch. After 5 minutes, Hyukjae back to his room and started to dress up. He put his T-shirt and pants on and didn’t forget to take his thick jacket and cap. Yes, he was still feeling uncomfortable about his new hair cut.
“Aish, so short.” He once again looked in the mirror.
He was about to open the door, ready to go when suddenly Donghae entered his room and grabbed his waist.
“Why so early?” asked Donghae giving Hyukjae a peck on his cheek.
“Schedule, Hae.” Hyukjae shivered a bit. He was startled by Donghae’s cold skin. “You’re so cold. Where did you sleep last night?” Hyukjae questioned as he's rubbing Donghae’s cheek gently.
Smiling, Donghae took Hyukjae’s hands and kissed it. “I’m okay. You looked so tired yesterday. I just didn’t want to bother you.”
“..and rape you.”
“Awww, what a sweet boyfriend I have.” Hyukjae hugged Donghae tightly.
Donghae hugged him back whole-heartedly.
Hyukjae was about to release their hug when he thought of something. Something that Donghae would like. Hyukjae realized that he had to do something, to make it up to his boyfriend. So, with a damn sexy voice, Hyukjae whispered in Donghae’s ear, “Tonight is your lucky night, Sir.”
Donghae smiled secretly. He knew this time would come. The time when Hyukjae would finally feel guilty and decide to make up to him. How would Donghae know? He just knew. It’s Hyukjae we’re talking about. He’s just too innocent and.. cute. Hearing the bells ringing and the music playing in his head Donghae asked huskily, “Really? How is that?”
“Make me your slave and I’ll do anything as you say~”
“Even if I say let’s make love for seven days and seven nights straight?” teased Donghae squeezing Hyukjae’s butt.
Hyukjae yelped, “Hae, not now!”
“I’ll take that as a yes,” Donghae smiled cheekily.
Hyukjae rolled his eyes. “Well, gotta go. Wait till I come home, okay? And don’t touch yourself. I mean it, Hae.”
Donghae frowned, “Why will I touch myself if I’m going to see heaven tonight?”
Hyukjae chuckled, “Aww, what a cheesy boyfriend I have.”
 

 
♥ ♥  
 


Donghae was lying on the couch lazily. Switched the channel again and again without even care what the show was all about. He then stopped pressing the remote button and tried to watch KBS channel.
“Oh, it’s Dream Team.” Donghae got up and sat straight. “Hyung!! Hyukkie’s on TV!!” Donghae shouted to whoever hyung over there without taking his eyes off of the TV.
A minute later Leeteuk and Shindong who had schedules later, had joined Donghae in the TV room craving on Let’s Go Dream Team Season II.
Everyone was still happily laughing at Hyukjae’s dorkiness until finally the high jump part came.
“So, Eunhyuk. It’s your turn now. You think you can reach 2 meters?” asked the MC.
Eunhyuk nodded confidently.
“Okay, it’s time for Eunhyuk who has a very strong bond with Minho!” said the MC.
Donghae scrunched his face.
“Wait a moment.” Danny An said interrupting the moment.
“Why?” the MC asked and the camera shot at Danny’s face.
“Do you know what Minho just said to me about Eunhyuk?”
Minho bent down his face smiling shyly.
Hyukjae looked at him with curiosity on his eyes.
“Minho said to me, “Hyung, doesn’t Eunhyuk-hyung looked cute when he jumped?””
“WHAT DID MINHO JUST SAY ABOUT HYUKKIE??” Donghae got up from his seat screaming at his two shocked hyungs.
Leeteuk and Shindong managed to calm Donghae down. Repeatedly saying that Minho just joked around. Donghae had enough. He stomped to the kitchen and grabbed Hyukkie’s strawberry milk that purposely left by the owner inside the refrigerator. Donghae went toward his room and drank the strawberry milk in one gulped. He took a glance at his computer, “No way.”
The first time Hyukjae was offered to take part at the Let’s Go Dream Team Season 2, Donghae already knew that Hyukjae and Minho got paired up. He was happy and didn’t even complain. He considered Minho as his younger brother. So, what’s the problem? But when people including Super Junior fans started making things up about Minho/Eunhyuk pairing, he was feeling a little disturbed. But he trusted Hyukjae and Hyukjae trusted him. Nothing to worry about. “It’s only for the show.” He kept that in his mind.
Today was different. He was getting a little suspicious. So he pulled his chair in front of his computer and started typing ‘Eunhyuk – Minho’. The results he found were not good. From all of the pictures he had found about Hyukjae and Minho together, there was one that made him really furious. It was the picture of Hyukjae and Minho at the Golden Disk Award. Hyukjae was carried by Minho, hugging tightly and laughing happily to each other as Hyukjae shedding his happy tears.
“This is not right.”
Another results and Donghae found the fancam. The fancam was focusing on Hyukjae. It first started with Siwon hugged Hyukjae, then Hyukjae hugged Jessica, another hug to Seohyun, and then..
“WHAT THE HELL???” Donghae yelled pushing his seat abruptly.
Donghae clenched his fist, “Why didn’t I even notice?”
He rubbed his temple and stormed out of his room.
“Donghae-ah, are you okay?” Leeteuk asked worriedly.
Donghae swayed his hands and asked impatiently about the schedule that Hyukjae had today.
“He’s shooting for Dream Team.”
Donghae's eyes widen in shock, “But, why so early in the morning?”
“He went to Minho’s graduation ceremony first,” Donghae was about to yell when Leeteuk cut him, “with the other members of Dream Team,” said Leeteuk carefully.
Donghae rubbed his temple again, “This is just not right.”

~to be continued~


A/N: I got messed up with the timeline about the events in this fic. And I don’t think this came out well. About the moment when Minho said that Hyuk was cute when he jumped in the LGDT Season 2; that was true. But I forget which episodes (I’ll try to find it). Minho carried Hyuk? That also based on real event. I don’t know if u have seen it yet, but I’m gonna give u the link below . Hope u enjoy my dear fellas~


Minho carried Hyuk: THIS WAY

video credits to nang999@youtube
 
 
 
Current Location: my messy living room
Current Mood: blankblank
Current Music: Sorry, Sorry Answer - Super Junior
 
 
 
hitsu~♥hitsugaya15 on March 15th, 2010 07:30 pm (UTC)
SPOTTTT

READ BEGINNING AND SOUNDS AWSOME!
hitsu~♥: DongHae-Mhitsugaya15 on March 15th, 2010 08:25 pm (UTC)
kyaaa love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
love it love it!!! can't wait till part 2!!!

i srly don't feel comfortable with hyukkie and minho pairing as well as hae and minho i'm too posessive of my OTP ;)

this story is love!! keep it up!
(no subject) - hyukhae4ever on March 16th, 2010 01:20 am (UTC) (Expand)
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ThatsForMe2Know: Donghaethatsforme2know on March 15th, 2010 07:35 pm (UTC)
hae is jealous xD
awwhh but he doesn't have to worry
Eunhyuk loves him and only him 8DDD
and if Hae does know his lover well
he should know that he is not interested in Minho xD
waiting for the next part C;

~*Po0f*~
vivalahyuk: pic#98988200vivalahyuk on March 16th, 2010 09:15 am (UTC)
but, if hae understands hyuk too well then i can't continue this fic.
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOL.
sorry, joking xD
thx for your comment, dear.
i'll post it around weekend.
dbsj0001dbsj0001 on March 15th, 2010 07:51 pm (UTC)
awww~ hae is jealous and he's acing so cute!
and i'm really looking forward to the next parts!
i mean after i saw dreamt team season2 and minho said hyukie was cute i just definitely saw this vision of hae acting all jealous!xP
I've been looking forward for someone to write a fic about that or something about that! xD
REALLY~ looking forward for the next part!
vivalahyuk: pic#98985595vivalahyuk on March 16th, 2010 09:19 am (UTC)
me too! me too!
after minho said that hyukkie's face was like, "Ah~ Hae is soo gonna kill me!!"
LOL.
really? thank you!!!
wait for it >_
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vivalahyukvivalahyuk on March 16th, 2010 09:17 am (UTC)
LOL at your icon!!!
i'll post it around weekend.
thx for reading and commenting!!
suju_wonderbangsuju_wonderbang on March 15th, 2010 08:48 pm (UTC)
Ooh, super interesting!!!!!
Ah, jealous!Hae~
But meh...I dun really like MinHo/EunHyuk either, Hae. XD Or DongHae/MinHo for that matter...DongHaexEunHyuk/HaeHyuk/EunHae forever!!! :DDD
Can't wait for more!
Byes!!
vivalahyuk: pic#98985595vivalahyuk on March 16th, 2010 09:20 am (UTC)
IKR!!!
HaeHyuk FTW!!!
HaeHyuk never dies!!
thx for reading and commenting ^^
noroimononoroimono on March 15th, 2010 09:37 pm (UTC)
LOL!!! i totally remember that DT ep and minho's comment... i was seriously thinking the same "oh no hae's gonna be jealous >o<"
anyways... i LOVE jealous!hae and also minho/eunhyuk couple! BUT HAEHYUK will always win~ <3
great fic, cant wait for the next part ^-^
vivalahyuk: pic#98988200vivalahyuk on March 16th, 2010 09:21 am (UTC)
you exactly right!!
i love jealous!hae that's why i made this fic ^^.
yesyesyes, HaeHyuk FTW!!!
thank you for reading and commenting.
once i get the feeling i can't shut downdrawingintheair on March 15th, 2010 11:20 pm (UTC)
love jealous hae!! he's always so funny.

oh, whenever they pair either of them with minho it gives me the creeps. it's just wrong. but the worst is when they're is sihyuk or sihae. (i hate it when people mess with my otp.)

*wants more soon*
vivalahyukvivalahyuk on March 16th, 2010 09:23 am (UTC)
oh, you're here!!
haha. i also hate sihae or minho/donghae.
but i love jealous!hae and possessive!hae~
lololololol >_<
thx for your comment, dear~
ime-chanime_ime_ime on March 15th, 2010 11:48 pm (UTC)
whoa, i thought you write a smut in the beginning >///<

over protective hae is scary ^.^

update please!!!
ime-chanime_ime_ime on March 15th, 2010 11:54 pm (UTC)
didn't hae there? when minho carried hyukie?
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vivalahyukvivalahyuk on March 16th, 2010 09:25 am (UTC)
thank you!!!
*blushing hard*
i will update this fic around weekend.
you know, school~
*sigh*
thx once again!!!
cocobandacocobanda on March 16th, 2010 12:43 am (UTC)
so cute..& interesting waiting for the next chapter..^^
vivalahyuk: pic#98988200vivalahyuk on March 16th, 2010 09:25 am (UTC)
i'll post it around weekend.
wait for it okay ^^~
thx for reading and commenting.
-lhen-: haehyukkamenajin on March 16th, 2010 02:20 am (UTC)
so so interesting ^^
can't wait for the next chapter
hehehe
jealous Hae is love
vivalahyukvivalahyuk on March 16th, 2010 09:26 am (UTC)
we all love jealous!hae, don't we?
thx for reading and commenting.
part 2 will be coming around weekend ^^~
fanaehfanaeh on March 16th, 2010 06:28 am (UTC)
LOL...i love minho/eunhyuk..but just as brotherly love...
haehyuk FTW....
hae jealous<333
i wonder what hae will do next to protect his hyukkie...
can't wait for next XD
vivalahyuk: pic#98985595vivalahyuk on March 16th, 2010 09:27 am (UTC)
true! true! true!
haehyuk FTW!!!
jealous! hae FTW!!
lololol.
thx for reading and commenting~
azaChiaki: Donghae2azachiaki on March 16th, 2010 07:54 am (UTC)
hae is JEALOUS! you better be careful after this hyukkie!
minho is my fav member in shinee... :P
i want more.. pleaseeeee..........
vivalahyuk: pic#98985595vivalahyuk on March 16th, 2010 09:28 am (UTC)
haha. yes, hyukkie better be careful!
kekekekeke..
*oh my why am i so pervert?*
i'll update it around weekend.

p.s. and i want your precious love!!
i wonder what'll happen in donghae's home!!!
>////<
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letmeflyaway: haehyuk dreammcts051129 on March 16th, 2010 09:32 am (UTC)
woah bb i see tat ur improving LOL
just a tiny little bit of grammatical errors but it's really nth at all xDDDD
SMUT IN NEXT CHAPPIE ♥♥♥??? *slaps herself hard*
*faints away due to bad stomach ache*
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Mr Sandman Is Insanesandmanisinsane on March 16th, 2010 10:00 am (UTC)
Horny and Jealous Fishy .....xD
vivalahyuk: pic#98985595vivalahyuk on March 16th, 2010 10:09 am (UTC)
haha~
hae is indeed a horny man, right?
*blushing*
thx for reading and commenting!!
xapplekiss on March 16th, 2010 11:18 am (UTC)
:DDD LOLOLOL. THIS. IS. AWESOME. xD I watch LGDT every Wednesday and Monday, but I only see EUnhyuk and Minho bickering with each other. xD
vivalahyuk: pic#98988200vivalahyuk on March 16th, 2010 01:00 pm (UTC)
thank you!!!
oh, you have to watch the part when minho did say that eunhyuk was cute when he jumped!! that's epic!!
but, i forget which episodes.
*sorry*
thx for reading and commenting anyway ^^
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eiashleeeiashlee14 on March 16th, 2010 03:33 pm (UTC)

i say, whenever EunHyuk and Minho are together, they look cute..but of course, DongHae is still his man.

vivalahyukvivalahyuk on March 16th, 2010 04:15 pm (UTC)
can't agree more.
donghae is the one and only man in hyukjae's heart~
*nods..nods..*
thx for reading and commenting ^^
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vivalahyuk: pic#98988200vivalahyuk on March 17th, 2010 08:51 am (UTC)
thank you!!!
yesyesyes, romantic!hae is making us goes 'awwww!!!'
but jealous!hae is.. indeed scary~
*got shot by hae*
thx for reading and commenting!
kajujux3 on March 17th, 2010 03:14 am (UTC)
WooO!
This.. is... dope.. tast.. ic.
=]

~~ I love Minho & Hyukkie together. *gets bricked by HyukHae fans*

But srsly.. I do.
Looking forward to moreeee! :]
vivalahyukvivalahyuk on March 17th, 2010 08:55 am (UTC)
awww, thank you!!
i love minho and hyuk together too just because i can see jealous!hae!! lololol.
*snatched u away from haehyuk fans*
thx for reading and commenting ^^
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crystalmicky on March 20th, 2010 01:26 pm (UTC)
aah this is so new! I never knew Minho and Eunhyuk were close >:) I love the plot! except I feel bad for poor hae hae, so jealous~ I can't wait for the next parts :)
vivalahyuk: pic#98985595vivalahyuk on March 20th, 2010 01:55 pm (UTC)
i've already posted the next part this morning~
you can click new entry ^^
i felt bad for hae too but.., well, i love jealous!hae!!
LOL.
silencewhite: chuhaesilencewhite on April 5th, 2010 01:49 pm (UTC)
huaaaa I'm sorry that Im reading it Sooo late.. I was waiting for it to finish.. and here I am.. I hope you don't mind... huaaaa I'm lovin it.. thank you for the fanfiction go to the next chapter :)