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20 March 2010 @ 11:35 am
When Minho Steps In Pt. 2  
Title : When Minho Steps In
Author : vivalahyuk
Pairing : Donghae/Eunhyuk; slight Minho/Eunhyuk
Rating : PG

A/N: Total fail! Total fail! Total fail! The story didn’t come out pretty well. I got headache because of my f**king homework!! That’s why this one was really short. Mianhe~ *bows* I promised to be better in the next part. And it's supposed to be two shots but my mind got distracted by SS2 Malaysia. I wanna be there!! Why, God?? Why?? Argghh!! *bites my pillow -_____-* Oh, and i feel sorry because Minho got injured while filming DT. Get well soon, Minho~

“God, Donghae! Cut it out, will ya?!!” Kangin pushed Donghae aside feeling annoyed.
The clock had had passed 9:00 PM and Hyukjae wasn’t home yet. And Donghae, still not finished rubbing his temple was now all over the place. He sat on the dining table checking his cell phone every ten seconds, he lied on the floor covering his eyes with one hand, he checked the refrigerator looking for something he didn’t even know, and now he walked back and forth in front of serious Kangin who was watching gossips on TV.
“You’re blocking the TV!” Kangin exclaimed.
Donghae turned around to face his hyung and said with a mocking tone, “Hyung, you’re watching gossips.”
“News,” corrected Kangin shortly, his eyes glued on TV.
Donghae sighed heavily. Feeling too exhausted to talk back he joined Kangin on the couch watching so-called news.
Leeteuk, who had just got dressed, came out from his room. It was time for him to go to the Sukira schedule.
“I’m going,” said Leeteuk putting on his shoes.
Donghae who was now staring lifelessly at the ceiling suddenly jumped out from the couch, “Ah, hyung! You’re going to Sukira right? I’ll come with you, hyung. I’m gonna meet Hyukkie there,” said Donghae as he grabbed his jacket.
“But.., Hyuk’s not coming to Sukira tonight. Kyu is replacing him.”
Donghae froze in bewilderment, “Why?”
“Danny-hyung just called me. He said the Dream Team’s members are having party to celebrate Minho’s graduation after the shooting tonight. Unfortunately.., Hyukjae’s cell phone’s out of battery so Danny-hyung called me instead,” explained Leeteuk carefully eyeing Donghae’s face.
Donghae closed his eyes placing both hands on his hips. After a few long deep breaths he opened his eyes and managed to speak, “And you let Hyukkie go so easily, hyung?”
Not good,” thought Leeteuk.
“Well, hyung?” asked Donghae waiting for the most reasonable answer his hyung can give or he swore he would ruin Minho’s party and bring his Hyukkie’s home.
Leeteuk sighed in frustration, “Danny-hyung is the one who asked me, Donghae-ah. It’s hard for me to say no. Besides all of the Dream Team’s members are coming.”
“Exactly. All of the Dream Team’s member are there, right? So why Hyukkie is still included?” said Donghae, pinpointed every words.
Leeteuk rolled his eyes, “Hyukjae is the Dream Team’s member, remember?”
“But, everybody’s there. One person’s missing is not a big deal, right?”
Leeteuk let out another sigh, “You’re wasting my time. I’m going now. See ya around, guys~”
“HYUNG!!!!” Donghae groaned helplessly as he watched Leeteuk back disappeared from his sight.
“Aish, zip it! I can’t hear what the announcer said!”

♥ ♥ ♥

The shooting of Let’s Go Dream Team Season II had just finished 15 minutes ago. Every member was getting ready to change their clothes to something clean. But Hyukjae still roamed all over the shooting set as he held his phone tightly, feeling uneasy. There was a man that disturbing his mind now. Lee Donghae. His lover. His life. His soul. Hyukjae was worried he couldn’t comply his promise that he had made this morning. He’s a man. Well.., in this relationship he’s the girl but still.. he has dick to prove enough that he’s a man. And as a man his father taught him to always fulfill a promise. “Dammit!” Hyukjae cursed to his cell phone.
“Oh hyung, you’re there,” Minho said as he ran towards Hyukjae.
“Ah, Minho-ah,” Hyukjae lifted his head a little, already feeling gloomy.
Minho observed Hyukjae’s face knowing something was not right, “What happened, hyung?”
Hyukjae stayed silence.
“Is this still about the game? Oh come on hyung, stop whining!” Minho punched Hyukjae’s shoulder lightly, “You can win another time. You know I’m an unbeatable ace,” teased Minho, grinned widely as he kept punching Hyukjae’s shoulder.
Hyukjae looked at Minho with disbelief, sending him a deathly glare.
“Okay..okay.., what happened? Geez, I was just joking..”
Hyukjae sighed, “Well.., I have something to do back at the dorms, but I’m gonna feel really guilty if I’m not coming to your celebration party, Minho-ah.”
“You can come home earlier if you want, hyung.”
Stood up suddenly, Hyukjae grabbed Minho’s shoulders, “Really? Really? Really?”
Minho nodded, smiling lightly as he saw Hyukjae shaking his shoulders vigorously.
“Thank you, Minho-ah!” Hyukjae hugged Minho happily showing his gummy smile.
“Let’s go!” Releasing his hug, Hyukjae dragged Minho to the others, didn’t notice a bright pink flush suddenly appear on the younger’s cheek.

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“CHEEEERSSS!!!” Everybody shouted out raising their glasses and tossing it to each other.
Hyukjae couldn’t stand alcohol. So instead of having beer, he filled his glass with flavored soda. Everyone was laughing along happily as they took turn to congratulate Minho, giving him hug and pat on the back. Hyukjae checked at his watch which already reached 11:30 PM. His eyes widen in disbelief.
“Time to go, hyung?” asked Minho who was sitting next to him.
“Yeah, I’m sorry Minho-ah,” Hyukjae apologized putting on his jacket and cap.
Hyukjae was about to say good bye to everyone when Danny shouted at him, already drunk, “Where are you going, Eunhyuk-ah? We’re not finished.” Danny offered a glass of beer in front of Hyukjae’s face, “Here, drink it!”
“I’m sorry but I don‘t drink, hyung,” Hyukjae said politely.
“Come on, just one shot and you can go all you want!” Danny insisted and everybody started cheering on Hyukjae, “Yeah! Drink~”
Hyukjae bit his lip and looked at Minho. Minho shook his head, sending a word ‘NO’ to Hyukjae.
“Eunhyuk! Eunhyuk! Eunhyuk!” Everyone in the room started chanting Hyukjae’s name, heating up the atmosphere.
Stupid hyungs! Hyukjae muttered to himself. Didn’t want to have a bad reputation and being judge as a disrespectful young man, Hyukjae took the glass from Danny. ‘Oh, this is one big glass.’ Hyukjae shrugged it off and took his first sip. He scrunched his nose. But wanted to go home as fast as he could, he got a grip and drank it until the last final drip.
“Way to go Eunhyuk!” Danny patted his back.
Hyukjae closed his eyes and felt something was not right inside him. He lost his balance and fell down on the floor with a loud thud.
“Hyung, are you okay?” Minho rapidly drew Hyukjae’s body closer and shook him.
“Can’t..drink..anymore Minho-ah..” Hyukjae mumbled, feeling his head was about to explode. Couldn’t stand it any longer Hyukjae collapsed in Minho’s arms.

~to be continued~

Current Mood: annoyedannoyed
Current Music: I'm A Loner - CN Blue
dbsj0001dbsj0001 on March 20th, 2010 04:56 am (UTC)
what's wrong with hyukkie's drink?what will donghae do?
and does minho like eunhyuk?(sorry for all the questions)
and donghae's hyukkie radar should be tingling by now! ;P
can't wait for the next part!
vivalahyukvivalahyuk on March 20th, 2010 03:29 pm (UTC)
nothing was wrong with hyuk's drink.
he just couldn't stand alcohol.
now i'm thinking.., is that the reaction could possibly that fast? -_____-'
omgosh, i told ya it's total fail!! lolololol.
i'm gonna reveal it in the next part~
*evil grin*
suju_wonderbangsuju_wonderbang on March 20th, 2010 05:03 am (UTC)
OOh, yay!!!! ^________^
Lol DongHae is such a worry-wart. XD
Haha, KangIn watching gossip~
But...LE GASP!!
Oh noes!
Hyukkie can't handle ze alcohol! >_____>
Now he can't keep the promise he made with Hae...
Thank you for updating!
Can't wait for the next chappie!
vivalahyuk: pic#98985595vivalahyuk on March 20th, 2010 04:01 pm (UTC)
he's too protective over hyuk, isn't he? >_<
yes, poor hyukkie~ -__-'
no, thank you for reading and commenting!! ^^
xapplekiss on March 20th, 2010 05:09 am (UTC)
DDDDD: I'm excited for the next part. :DDDD
vivalahyuk: pic#98988200vivalahyuk on March 20th, 2010 04:04 pm (UTC)
Re: D:
so do i, my friend.
so do i~
i myself wonder what am i going to write for the next part.
xD xD xD
Re: D: - xapplekiss on March 21st, 2010 03:18 am (UTC) (Expand)
Re: D: - vivalahyuk on March 22nd, 2010 06:21 am (UTC) (Expand)
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letmeflyawaymcts051129 on March 20th, 2010 05:59 am (UTC)
letmeflyaway: haehyuk onmybackmcts051129 on March 20th, 2010 06:04 am (UTC)
oh bb u got headache?! then go to rest! NOW! don't make me worry about you! *slaps herself*
and omfg minho u r so lucky but i'm sorry hyukkie belongs to hae so dun u try to rape him when he is drunk. IT'S HAE'S JOB LOL
(no subject) - vivalahyuk on March 20th, 2010 04:10 pm (UTC) (Expand)
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fanaehfanaeh on March 20th, 2010 06:23 am (UTC)
awwww...poor hae..he will not be getting a piece of hyuk tonight...LOL
*gasp* minho like eunhyuk???
hmmm..this will be interesting...muahahaha
vivalahyuk: pic#98985595vivalahyuk on March 20th, 2010 04:15 pm (UTC)
hahaha, i'm sure he's getting insane by now.
*got kicked by hae*
minho likes hyuk??
*acting innocent*
ai_sumairuai_sumairu on March 20th, 2010 06:48 am (UTC)
OMG!!! Hyukkie!!! DX Stupid hyungs indeed. OMG OMG OMG!!!! I smell trouble somehow...

Oh but I love this part...

Well.., in this relationship he’s the girl - LOL! He is!!! XD
vivalahyuk: pic#98988200vivalahyuk on March 20th, 2010 04:19 pm (UTC)
*calms you down*
oh, thank you~
you're making me blushed~
yesyesyes, hyuk is hae's only girl!!
or should i say.., slave??
(no subject) - ai_sumairu on March 21st, 2010 04:03 am (UTC) (Expand)
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vivalahyukvivalahyuk on March 20th, 2010 04:29 pm (UTC)
i can't wait to write for another part either!!
ohohoh, i will post it asap!!
but my homework..
*pouts cutely*
ime-chan: jungsu1ime_ime_ime on March 20th, 2010 08:48 am (UTC)
yay! happy homework! ^^
hyukie didn't stand alcohol? will minho take the 'change' to do 'something' while hyukie drunk?
well, just finish your homework so we can have an update!!
happy homework, gehehehe <3
vivalahyuk: pic#98985595vivalahyuk on March 20th, 2010 04:34 pm (UTC)
unnie, you're creepy~
*and pervy*
screw homework~
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vivalahyuk: pic#98988200vivalahyuk on March 20th, 2010 04:43 pm (UTC)
oh, sorrysorrysorrysorry~
*rubs hands*
i will make him feel better in the next part..
or will i..??
*grins evilly*
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vivalahyukvivalahyuk on March 20th, 2010 04:47 pm (UTC)
ohmygod, i'm really sorry i made hyukkie like that~
don't hate me!!
*points comment above you*
please anticipate ^^
crystalmicky on March 20th, 2010 01:55 pm (UTC)
I can't wait for the next part @_@ omg <3 I love it
vivalahyukvivalahyuk on March 20th, 2010 04:51 pm (UTC)
oh, you're finally here ^^
i'll update soon.
*burned my homework*
thank you~
cocobandacocobanda on March 20th, 2010 02:42 pm (UTC)
me too.. can't wait for the next part
vivalahyukvivalahyuk on March 20th, 2010 04:57 pm (UTC)
as soon as i get rid of my homeworks i'll post it soon ^^
now excuse me, i'm going to burn my homeworks~
*moves slowly to the dark corner*
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vivalahyuk: pic#98985595vivalahyuk on March 21st, 2010 02:58 am (UTC)
really?? thank you~
*blushing hard*
gossip is kangin daily dose xD
nononono, don't say that out loud!
haehyuk fans will be mad~
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(no subject) - vivalahyuk on March 22nd, 2010 06:17 am (UTC) (Expand)
kajujux3 on March 20th, 2010 06:09 pm (UTC)
This. Is. EPIC.
Not fail at all,!!!

~~ Lol@ KangIn watching gossips on tv. Hahahahaa.

Awwh, MinHo!! Awwh! EunHyuk!!
Lol DongHae's jealousy!

Looking forward to Part 3!!!
vivalahyuk: pic#98985595vivalahyuk on March 21st, 2010 03:16 am (UTC)
Re: =D
that is kangin's daily dose, isn't that?
awwww, thank you~
i'll post it asap.
*screw my homework*
thx once again ^^
hitsu~♥hitsugaya15 on March 20th, 2010 08:00 pm (UTC)
oh no!! next part!! next part!! wahh i hate hwk too! but i don't think this was a fail chap! cuz i love this story! ^^
vivalahyuk: pic#98988200vivalahyuk on March 21st, 2010 03:19 am (UTC)
yeah, homework is the worst!!!
thank you anyway~
Ryuu-chan: Kingdom Heartsryuutsuki on March 20th, 2010 09:11 pm (UTC)
Did Eunhyuk get drugged? O_O; Hope not. Go back to Donghae, Eunhyukkie >__<~~

I like the story so far~
vivalahyuk: pic#98988200vivalahyuk on March 21st, 2010 03:22 am (UTC)
nonono, he didn't get drugged.
he got drunk.
is the reaction of someone's drink beer could possibly that fast?
i'm sorry. fail~
and thank you for reading and commenting ^^
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vivalahyuk: pic#98988200vivalahyuk on March 21st, 2010 02:01 pm (UTC)
*looks else where*
LOL. looks like everyone was worried what minho's gonna do to hyuk.
*points comment above u*
hyukhae4ever: argh...!!!hyukhae4ever on March 21st, 2010 02:00 pm (UTC)
stupid hyungs!!
why did you have to forced Hyukkie to drink...
omg. what will happen now?
vivalahyuk: pic#98985595vivalahyuk on March 21st, 2010 02:17 pm (UTC)
ah unnie, you're back!!!
i read the live updates through twitter and i was crying like a baby!
*ugh, i'm sorry for grumbling*
uh-oh, i've made everyone made at me because i wrote hyuk that way xD xD
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hyukie09hyukie09 on March 21st, 2010 10:06 pm (UTC)
vivalahyukvivalahyuk on March 22nd, 2010 06:34 am (UTC)
i myself don't know how many parts am i going to write xDDD
hyuk wanted to go home asap to meet his fishy, being forced by his hyungs, so he drank it.
oh no, now i feel like i'm sucha bad guy for making hyuk drank~
(no subject) - hyukie09 on March 22nd, 2010 08:19 am (UTC) (Expand)
ThatsForMe2Know: EunHyukthatsforme2know on March 23rd, 2010 11:25 pm (UTC)
omg.. how come this is a failure when i loved it..?? O;
ughh... ~*slaps hyungs*~ now what will hae say when knows
what happened..??
and and hyukkie... you should've said no...
and and... minho, you better don't do anything to hyukkie
~*stares*~ >> haha 8D
i already wanna know what will happen O;

vivalahyukvivalahyuk on March 24th, 2010 06:09 am (UTC)
really?? aww, thank you, sweetie ^^
i think hae's nape is shivering right now~
you know, hyukkie radar xDDDD
and about minho..
you have to wait for the next part :DDD
silencewhite: nyuusilencewhite on April 5th, 2010 01:57 pm (UTC)
huaaaa here I am at the second part... hyukkie wanted to go home where hae is.. he such a cute bf. hae must be really worried.. what gonna happen next. wah *going to the next part excitedly* thank you for the fan fiction ><